First of all, thank you for taking the time to read and respond to my work, it is much appreciated!
Thank you for your kind words, but they shouldn’t be given at your own expense. Give yourself some time, don’t be hard on yourself, and above all else, ensure you read MORE than you write. Engage with other writers, learn from them. If you ever need somebody to look over a draft for you, feel free to hit me up, my author page on Facebook is: www.facebook.com/jonpetersauthor